Blog Post 08-Final Draft of Story

In creative class we were asked to write a  short story of your own choice. First we were asked to make a rough draft on the story. This is my final story.

 

Dog saved the day!!!!

 

Once there used to live a husband and wife and a dog. Their names used to be Claire and Josh and the dog’s name was Bob. They lived in a huge mansion full of luxurious and expensive stuff. One day the husband and wife decided to go shopping. It was a nice and clear day. Best for shopping. They had left Bob at home to guard the house. They never knew that a robber was spying on them. He had been waiting to rob this house for weeks. His name was Jack. Once Claire Josh and left he decided to rob the house. He never knew they had a dog. So once he got there all the doors were locked and all windows were closed. But when he looked at the top he saw a chimney. He decided to go through the chimney. It was very small but somehow he fit into that dirty old chimney. As soon as he reached the bottom of the chimney he saw Bob sleeping on the floor. He was very afraid of dogs. But he decided to walk quietly and while he was robbing he tripped and fell. Bob heard that and suddenly ran to the kitchen. He started barking heavily. Jack got scared he started running. He was no match for Bob. But Bob was only 6 months old so he didn’t have teeth. So instead of biting he started barking loudly. He barked so loud he got the neighbor’s attention. The neighbor’s rushed to Claire and Josh’s house. They didn’t know why Bob was barking. So instead of calling Claire and Josh she called the police. Meanwhile, Jack had no idea how to get out of the house. And Bob got tired of barking so he stopped. Jack was so happy until bob went and drank some water and continued to bark. After that the police came. They broke into the house and caught Jack. Bob was the hero. He was so happy. When all this was happening Claire and Josh came home. And both of them were very surprised. After they got to know the whole story they were happy they had Bob

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